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Old Posted: 01-23-10 at 02:53 PM
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lets throw it down
1 verse
im boredk andk i have new skills
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Old Posted: 01-23-10 at 05:03 PM
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new skills?...lol
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Old Posted: 01-23-10 at 05:43 PM
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new skills?...lol
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im so high like a midway flight
so dope, you can put me in todays pipe
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Old Posted: 01-24-10 at 02:54 AM
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im so high like a midway flight
so dope, you can put me in todays pipe
ahahahahaha...
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Old Posted: 01-26-10 at 01:53 AM
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man that's all you do is hope LOL, drop your verse i suppose, you better
not rip off anybody elses shit, 1 verse, not best of 3, or 3 of 5, best of 1
i know it took you afew weeks to write this, so it had better be good
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Old Posted: 01-26-10 at 02:03 AM
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you know i can tell you've been writing this for afew weeks at least, this
is how i know

"lets throw it down
1 verse
im boredk andk i have new skills"


you only want one verse which i accept, you only wanting one verse
means that you intend to pull a kimbo, (try to immediately knock me out)
that's how i know, so it better be something substantial, if you lose again,
i won't accept another challenge from you so, like i said homie it had
better be good

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Old Posted: 01-26-10 at 03:22 PM
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you know i can tell you've been writing this for afew weeks at least, this
is how i know

"lets throw it down
1 verse
im boredk andk i have new skills"


you only want one verse which i accept, you only wanting one verse
means that you intend to pull a kimbo, (try to immediately knock me out)
that's how i know, so it better be something substantial, if you lose again,
i won't accept another challenge from you so, like i said homie it had
better be good
its decent idk about a knock out but yeah its deezo

shined up, wipedk down, im remarkable
your chain looks like you won it at a carnival
oldk soft ass rumar i know your eyes still wet
you an air water killa, you a chia pet
mama got you doing chores while she goes to work
goddamn nigga, ouch... that shit has to hurt
man... your laughable
so damn passable
andk you floppedk so hardk that your taxable
only tv spot you getting is on CNN
when they say they found your body in the lions den
money stackedk like im building it with linkin logs
you an irritating nigga, you a diaper rash
yous a nothing meaning wordk, your a habbadash
yeah that word means nothing like your career
do the rap game a favor andk dissappear
always blowing hot air, yous a pussy queef
i feel sorry for this nigga, throw him pitty beef
close your life like a brief case on three eight street
i'll have the police draw your portrait on the concrete

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Old Posted: 01-26-10 at 06:03 PM
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/Luckily i grew up with love, or i'd be an insane Murderer, Low-Key? nah
i never Heard Of Her, not a Word of Sure/

/Smeared, get Cleared like an Antihistamine, My lyrics burn the skill off
your tongue like Listerine, you're not a King but a Queen, yeah you must
be high thinking you could win, i'm talking Meth-Amphetamine/

/You're too soft like Whip-Cream, I'll Whip your whole Team, i'll Whip You
Your Crew, Everything you're Upto & Do & everything you've ever Seen/
/I'll hit you with a Big-Pun, i see graves for you, Dig-One, Set traps for
you, Rig-One, Smoked like a Cig-Son, Trig Tongue, Split your Shit,
Wig-One, you put on a shit show but the, Gig-Done/

/All that with which you Came is Lame, so Lame Refrain, from Speech,
Retrain your Brain, i Teach, irritating Remain a Pain i Breach, there's
nowhere in the universe i can't Reach/

/if you fly i'll blow up your Flight, no matter how Bright i'll put out your Light/
/no matter how far you're in my Sight, & if you die, here kid i'll be Right/
/pigeon bitch, i'll make you sick like the Avian Flu, smoke your Heart Make
Art like spliffs rolled with Arabian Glue, i'll Murder You you're Through, No
Movie, Not The Life Negotiater Smoothie like chris Sabian Do/
/Get Done, Done Get Did, Bet None, None Bet they Hid, Wet One, Sweat
None, I'll Rid/
/Low-Key Tweak, Slow O.G Beak, No Pro-ly Speak, So Lowly Weak,
Go Slowly Weep/

/"close your life like a Brief-Case" all talk coming from a Queef-Face,
i'll do the Hit that sparked the Lit, watch the cops Pace-You, then kill
them Too, come back later & Retrace you, piss on your face DisGrace
You, burn down your house to Place You, no family pictures, no nothing,
completely Erase You/

/You're "Taxable", cut you the fuck up You're Ax-able, i'm a scary
motherfucker i like you, Cease Decay, You're Waxable, no Peace Display,
Your Facts Are Dull, completely Smash Your Skull, sink you Gash Your Hull,
Trash Your Lull, No Sleep Kid, just Deep Wit, No Cheap Shit, So Reap It,
Peep It, the shit spinning like dj's when they Heap It, a dark Creep Hit/

^ i put 12 bars not even a full verse

the more thinkable word play

not a Word Of Sure (not sure of a word)
here kid i'll be Right (i'll be right here kid)
remember the movie the negotiater? chris sabian (kevin Spacey) was
samuel l jacksons negotiater

your verse was actually ALOT better this time though key, keep at it,
you're on your way up

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Old Posted: 01-26-10 at 06:08 PM
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oh yeah my lyrics were written to Mobb Deep (Shook Ones Part 2)

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Old Posted: 01-26-10 at 08:32 PM
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/Luckily i grew up with love, or i'd be an insane Murderer, Low-Key? nah
i never Heard Of Her, not a Word of Sure/
thats some pretty funny shit
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