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Old Posted: 01-26-10 at 11:00 PM
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but yeah like i said keep at it Key, you done got alot better, and you'll
only keep progressing too, that was alot more articulate this time
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/Luckily i grew up with love, or i'd be an insane Murderer, Low-Key? nah
i never Heard Of Her, not a Word of Sure/

Haha thas that shit

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Old Posted: 01-27-10 at 04:26 PM
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Kkey thas alot better keep goin likke that...Like i said b4 tht G shit wat i grew up on but every bar cant be bout a pistol, n u switched it up took advice thas wat its about tho spittn, bein critiqued, practice, n go n go n go til u go so far u cant go nuthin but hard...I wanna hear some audios from yall its hard ta tell tha way ya flippin wordplay sometimes on written n texts...But I liked both yall verses...Im gon start gettn down on battels wit yall eventually i jus dont do much battles no more but Writers Block need more action I mean this is a mainly based hip-hop forum its only ryte shit go on in here..But good shit botha yall...

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Old Posted: 01-27-10 at 06:54 PM
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Key this is what you should practice on, what i like to call associations,
i'm not so good at them so i need to practice up too but this is what most
of the expert battlers come to the table with, if you remember buddy, he
was really good at associations, they're called something else i'm sure in
technical hip-hop terminology but, peep this verse that buddy dropped, i'll
point out the good associations, he destroyed this dude

"I don't have the heart ta toss this young artist off
Cause then I'll kill the whole rap scene of Arkansas
I'm the biggest and best thing to come from the Chi shorty
Biggest thing outta Arkansas is the I-40
Come at me hard boy and bet that I'm squeezin k's
They won't ID you cause ya whole state has the same DNA!
I don't usually battle 28 year old men but I guess I'll try it
I'm going against the grain some like a lo carb diet
Rep ya city, proud of AK, nah i never seen it
I throw up the Chi you'd swear I'm bulimic
You straight from AK I spray the AK
I'll break you up more than buds of shake dank
Get ya shotgun you redneck and maybe a few fellas to kill
I'll have 101 dogs barking at ya crib like cruella deville
I got a "mac and nine with" some "mags that will fire clips"
And shed some pounds off ya ass like Jared "after the diet"
Red dot in ya eye like Terminator I'll terminate ya
Infared beam hit ya yeah the burners major
I'm tighter than a virgin never getting boned
You as tight as Tera Patrick fucking Evan Stone
Build you a boat to hide from my sharks that raw
And like Noah I'll take your Ark An' Saw (Arkansas)
Sink ya boat bring ya floats my razors sting ya throat
You taking a bath is like me fucking we use and bring the hoes (hose)
And we both do it like once a week yea spray ya body
Ya family reunion got more sex than Benet and Halle
My laser lock on as I pop the heat and rock ya streets
Yeah I got hemlock (him-locked) just like Socrates
Arkansas hick duck yeah head when I bring the heat out
Otherwise the impact might knock "both ya teeth out"
My rep getting bigger as I take the "The Ave" and make the cash
You like a bad film preview dawg you just "TRAILER TRASH!"

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Old Posted: 01-28-10 at 08:01 AM
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i thought this shit was gonna be like your last few verses, guess i was was wrong. you def. did come back with somethin' solid. i ain't even gonna hate.

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Old Posted: 01-28-10 at 11:24 AM
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and so another one has been swept under ken and rumars evil plot to take over the internet and the minds of our youth..lol..lol..lol..and so the plot thikins

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i burn baby burn

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Old Posted: 02-18-10 at 05:40 AM
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yeah i have some solid respect for you Key, no matter what i've said or
how hard i drilled and tried to discredit or humiliate you in previous
threads, you came through on this, i just read it again, keep at it,
when i used to be a member on another website people told me i wasn't
that good, and that i should just give up, regardless of their bs however
i didn't give up, i just practiced harder, came back later and blew up the
site and them with rhymes, i completely impressed the the creator of the
site and she spoke up out of nowhere and complimented me (battled me
too) which made alot of the other people jealous, but i took that as a
significant sign of belief from another, so this is me giving you your credit,
belief and compliment, so keep at this shit, and blow out the minds of the
world while you have the time here on earth, and when you have the
chance to do so
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