
Posted: 03-12-09 at 06:36 PM
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(a rhyme in your memory gorgeous)
/tears were hitting the ground when her son closed his
eyes laid down and died/
/the murderers drove off laughing like demons, and wern't
there to witness the pain as his family cried/
/suspected of murder, one by one they all fell, broke the
code and ratted on eachother, they lied/
/missing a part of herself never to be regained, she wept,
till she became tired and slept/
/in the early morning winds her sons ashes were swept,
fell to her knees screaming please, tears streaming
endlessly back to her home she crept/
/depressed, a sad soul will never rest, from when the sun
comes up till the moon comes out, as she got ready for bed
and undressed/
/stressed, for luck and time she was pressed, continually
going through old family photo's of happier times at their
best, before he left the nest, aching to be caressed/
/she prayed, to her savior to save the soul of her son, i
replied he's in a better place, this action won't be undone/
/from this pain you can't run, i know the weight of sorrow
weighs more than a ton, she asked for the icy grip of
death, i said look for warmth in the sun/
/and love, there will come a time when all this strife you're
above, seeing the ones you love soon again, eternal glory
forever amen/
/with time taken she slowly got a little better but never
forgot/
/the smile on her baby boy's face the last time she saw him
before he got shot/
/she hugged him that day and said that she loved him with
all of her heart/
/raised and cared for her beautiful little joy, and knew she
would right fromt he start/
/she knew life wasn't a toy, and that it could end fast in a
blast, and instantly cease/
/sewing sweaters for him as a ploy, reminiscing on the
past, with loving warm hearted words she knew he was
finally at peace/
/she knew of the time for she was told the hour, her long
wait finally fulfilled what she had requested/
/many years past, and at great long last, she went home
to see her son and finally rested/
(dedicated)
(1) beautiful just (1)
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Posted: 03-12-09 at 07:59 PM
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WTF HAPPENED TO EVERYTHING IN HERE
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^RuMaR- Propped: lol i just decided to re-make this thread that's all i'll up more later G
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Posted: 03-19-09 at 06:00 PM
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Elite of Tha Avenue
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Over a year of my life devoted without “missing a beat”
Now I’m tossing and turning and “missing some sleep”
My lips still have the feeling of “kissing ya cheek”
I refuse to give in to the “submission ta weep”
Now I’ve plunged “into the deep” will you “listen ta me”
I lov you so much yeah it sounds wrong when you’re “missing the E” ***
That’s “E as in Ethan” that’s the “reason ya weeping”
Your smile puts strong dudes “even with weak men”
I get weak when you laugh and wanna “squeeze ya tight”
I “need ya like” a cold bath when my “fever’s high”
Cause otherwise I’ll burn up with the “passion felt”
The cards are in motion as the “hand is dealt”
Will I “succeed or lose” c’mon I “need ya boo”
I “speak the truth” when I say my heart “bleeds for you”
Our love was a “seed that grew” into a “tree that fruits”
A love that is so strong there’s nothing “we can’t do”
Do you still think of me cause every day I think of you
I ask myself if the love that we shared was ever true
Do you love me cause I know that I still do
I’ll always be your man and you will always be my boo
Do you still think of me cause every day I think of you
I ask myself if the love that we shared was ever true
Do you love me cause I know I still do
Do you still think of me cause every day I think of you
Now we’re “over and done with” so “go and have fun with”
Some other guy while I can’t get “closer to one chick”
Without “thinking of you” my rap is “bringing the truth”
I hope you hear the love in my voice as I’m “singing this tune”
When I see you smile with him I “know it’s fake”
I “hope and pray” you “don’t convey”
Your love to another I’m “hopeless babe”
I’m “so insane” you “showed the way”
Of loving a girl to this “dopey lame”
I’ll “toke this flame” and “hope it may”
Help me to relax and “cope with pain”
I’m “so deranged” and “alone in vain”
My tears fall down like a “flowing rain”
***In case you didn't get that metaphor my name is Ethan
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Posted: 03-19-09 at 06:01 PM
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Elite of Tha Avenue
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When I’m with you, I’m me (SUNG)
But when I’m without you I don’t know who to be (RAPPED)
Cause you’re what made me into all that they see (SUNG)
So without you I’m without the best part of me (BOTH)
I’m reminiscing as I listen to the “rain dripping”
On my heart the “pain’s sitting” as I “lay listening”
To our song, while I’m eating our “favorite food”
I can’t “make it through” if I can’t “stay with you”
As I “play this tune” I think of “days with you”
You’re “amazing boo” that’s the “plainest truth”
You took a “piece of me” please “believe in me”
I’d change my indecencies so you’d “be with me”
I spend these nights teary and sleeplessly
So I’ll “chief this weed” to kill this pain “eating me”
I’m stuck with “shards of hope” while my “heart is broke”
I think of you and “start to choke” I’m “far from hope”
Fuck you I hate you I put nothing above you
Now we’re over and done and all I can say is I love you
When I’m with you, I’m me
But when I’m without you I don’t know who to be
Cause you’re what made me into all that they see
So without you I’m without the best part of me
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Posted: 03-19-09 at 06:06 PM
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Elite of Tha Avenue
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Lighting a blunt while riding a beat to "clear my mind"
Hoping Langston Hughes is jamming when he "hears my rhymes"
Feeling Big L is guiding my "words to success"
Hoping these demos is putting me on the "verge of success"
In my mind I'm on stage rockin' with "Jimmy Page"
Rockin' with Hendrix spitting so I can get "Fiddy paid"
I'll take that key from ya neck is that the key ta success
No that's just his chain let's pawn it and get keys ta the vette
See since they won't sign me I gotta get the cream
Cause I won't do a song with T-Pain or Dream
Rakim drop the Seventh so hip-hop will "know it's roots"
Cause these artists is half assing they just "blowing through"
Dropping albums without conceiving a rhyme is all nonsense
They proud of they freestyles but lyrically ain't a contest
I don't feel challenged by the "state of the game"
So I "pray for a change" and "contain all the rage"
Stay "sane for the pay" and dumb it down for the hoes
Save "change for the Range" and put it on 24's
No I'm off track like a train with no "sense of direction"
Vote me the best otherwise I will "contest the election"
Give me a Dre beat and I will spit "text in the session"
That'll blow his mind sign me I wanna be the "next on his record"
I'm the "best without question" but the test that is sanctioned
Show me "sense and direction" so that one day I will "make it"
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Posted: 03-19-09 at 09:23 PM
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here's some rhyme about something similar to your first 2
/being pessimistic is just something that the (hopeless do)/
/i think back, & (hope it's true), that i can still (hope with you)/
/thinking we'll be together always helps (cope me through)/
/i'm (choking too), without oxygen this pain will (rope me blue)/
/she's the equivalent that an olympian would (hold high)
(well i have my) (trophy too)/
/so when it comes to pain, i know (how to share), like
haters know (how to stare) with an even (louder glare)/
/without depth, i'd be like a testicular cancer patient (with
out a pair), (without love that's rare) i'd be like truth
(without the dare)/
/without love in the world could you (tell me the point), it'd
be like being a pothead without someone to (sell me a joint)/
/without her love it'd be like being without the (pain to
anoint) because it's (came to this point)/
/that pain gives depth, like a congressman to his buddy
will (strain to appoint)/
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Posted: 03-19-09 at 10:20 PM
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I kno most of the time im on some gun type shit
Well tonight im makin sure people don’t get hit
Its crazy to hear and see all the drama goin on
I still think its fucked up knowin some of my partnas gone
I guess it was in gods plan to take em from they home
Sometimes I wanna strike back, bustin at they dome
But I stop and remember that what goes around comes around
I kno one day everyone goin 6 feet in the ground
The ways ive seen people go aint no joke
Ive done my share of near death experiences, jus a poke
Too many times ive rode around lookin for someone
Too many times I see someone without my gun
I guess it’s a good thing tho, god wasn’t ready to let em go
In the back of they mind they gotta kno
Next time I see em its an ass whoopin comin they way
Young, old, real hair or a toupee
Ill give em a past jus this once
Only cuz they look high off too many blunts
As I sit here now is a blessin in itself
Puttin up with everthing thats on my shelf
God must have real big plans for me
Im always lookin over my shoulder jus to see
Always makin sure people aint runnin up
Prayin the day I wont have to make this gun hiccup
As I leave to see another day
Im prayin for it not to be gray
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Posted: 03-20-09 at 12:27 AM
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i like where this is going, anybody who wants to throw
down some of their rhyme, rap or poetry feel free
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Posted: 03-27-09 at 04:14 PM
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Elite of Tha Avenue
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Sit back and watch the ember burn to "ash and crush"
My head in the clouds rhyming as I "pass the dutch"
Rap isn't a fucking hobby man "raps a crutch"
I need it to make a living rather than "trap and bust"
I won't slang any more and stick up kid, forget it
Those aren't ways for a youth to make a living
But don't let the "name deceive" or I will "bang this heat"
I ain't ya Buddy I'm destined to spit heat and "claim the streets"
Rap is simple and most cats "stray from complex"
I rather "maim the context" that's why you "say that I'm best"
I let my "emotions bleed" I "cope with weed" and "toke this heat"
My "soul is deep" but just let me rap, "alone in peace"
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Posted: 03-27-09 at 05:20 PM
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Jus once in my life it’d like to see everyone ok
But I kno its far from it so imma lay
Down and see what comes my way
Thinkin’ everything is fun and games
Words that spoke the wrong way only inflame
If people only knew how to pick their words right
I guarantee that everything wouldn’t end in a fight
But enough of all this sad and sobby stuff
Im here to play poker, make sure u can see my bluff
If not I guess u goin home broke
Now how u bout to buy ur mama some coke
She bout to be pissed, throwin ur shit outside
Dont come to me talkin crazy on the Eastside
Cuz u kno that’s where I reside
I got riders and they willin to die
And they kno its vice versa
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