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Old Posted: 12-17-09 at 10:14 PM
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Matthew 24:10-13

10 Many people will give up and turn away at this time.
People will hand over each other. They will hate each other.
11 Many false religious teachers will come.
They will fool many people and turn them to the wrong way.
12 Because of people breaking the law and sin being everywhere,
the love in the hearts of many people will become cold.
13 But the one who stays true to the end will be saved.


Rise up! Discern the commencement of this finality
Our idealism steady contradicts subliminal reality
We've received a technicality; excusing us from doom
Yet soon, time will progress confirming the presumed
End, None can comprehend the extremity of tribulation
That waits for those left scattered across abandoned nations
Substantial evidence inscribed onto preserved scripts
From God's heart to willing authors; spoken from fervent lips
Famines, pestilences and sorrows provide warnings
Eclipsed nighttime gives heed from the season of mourning
Earth is warring; yet in outer realms is supreme hostility
Iniquity vs. holiness; but most are blind to this enmity
This anxiety in me intensifies as I watch my T.V. screen
My eyes are made keen to death, war and events obscene
The "End of Age" has developed onto our present season
Guilty of treason, reject the gift yet embrace bitter reason
Justice claims to be upheld in a land abound in lawlessness
Refuse the omnipotent God and assert presumed flawlessness
And we awe-in-this, unsound land disclaiming it's creator
The world is full of educated doubters and learned debaters
In midst of takers, yet I will cling to this unconscious understanding
Freestanding; I stay in tune to these subliminal commandings.

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Old Posted: 02-15-10 at 07:44 AM
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^ that's very good Peachez
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Old Posted: 02-15-10 at 10:19 AM
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Thanks Something tells me "takers" should be "fakers"..I'd have to check the original but I'm too lazy. I have many more where this came from..

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Old Posted: 03-05-10 at 05:00 AM
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i wrote this for this girl named erin on a text, i text message battle and
rap alot between friends/people, anyway she liked it, its pretty decent so
i'll post it, i like the structure of it, only 3 bars/lines

Written to: Naughty By Nature - (Feel Me Flow)

/Girl my rhyme style is Unhinged, you try to Diet, but can't get enough
of me so you just Binged/
/can't be Quiet, i was on your mind so at the thought of another you
just Cringed, leaving feelings Singed/
/why pass Bye It, 1 wink why Deny It, spend the night at the Hyatt,
Oh My It, got the crazy Seduction, & you Eye It, love is my Introduction,
so baby let me Supply It, what could it hurt, just Try It/
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Old Posted: 03-05-10 at 02:59 PM
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It's Gixxtreme, and I'll make ya scream
I got ya walkin up to a murda scene
Go head, look at ya man, hes a has been
One look at me and I got him shakin in his skin
I stll rep that 219 to the fullest
Please dont run up, cuz I will pull this
U can talk the talk, but can u walk the walk?
If not, u better sit down, before u get knocked
Don't walk down my street, if u dont wanna be in shock
Cops too scared to come round these parts
They kno we aint got no hearts
We quick to throw u in a box
We got hobo's robbin' u for ya socks
The EastSide dont play no games
No graffiti on the walls, fuck ya name

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Old Posted: 04-12-10 at 02:05 AM
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Jus when I seem to be at the top, I'm still at the bottom
Haters laughin' and pointin' sayin' that we got em
My life needs to do a 360, its spinnin' outta control
I look in the mirror and I start to cry, where's my soul
I cant believe all the shit I've been through this year
If I could take it all back and not shed one tear
But I kno, what don't kill me, only makes me stronger
Yea I'm holdin' on, but not much longer
I'm still at it with the baby mama
Its as if I don't have enough drama
Shes tryin' to take me to court
Crazy bitch, all she wants is child support
I thank god for my family and friends
Without them I think a lot of people would see their end
And I don't wanna have to be the bad guy anymore
But the way she keeps pushin' me, Imma fuckin' kill this whore

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Old Posted: 06-04-10 at 03:58 AM
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just a cocky rhyme i wrote

/I hear a lot of talk, cats pick up the mic and bark, but in reality flee from
shadows and we that lurk in the dark who come so clean/
/pseudo's words written with crayons and chalk, what's real is often said
but seldom seen, pull up on their face and park, realists know what i mean/

/hammer cocked, my mouth bust true, lyrical titanic enough ice to sink and
rust you, dismantle your crews a must do, lyin ass who trust you, rocket
planet shaker thrust too with enough wind to permanently dust you
when this tornado gusts through/

/left you flustered, attacking rough, took everything you mustered to keep
backing up, lengthy war had you cracking up disgusted with the bs huff
you're hacking up, lacking rough never stacking up to what i'm racking up
have you packing up stuff no bluff ship out enough its too tough for slacking up/

/easily erase sets, so place bets, because my pace sets, the race that wets
when i face threats, man no chase lets, haters escape bass vets, speed? my case
is ace jets, and my verbal grace gets, as smoothe as lace when i taste your
girls lace pets/

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Old Posted: 07-15-10 at 08:40 PM
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my cousin writes too, i wrote this as a sample to him


/I Pro Flow, words hit dirty like a boxers connect from a Low Blow,
competitors get chewed up like gum i'm talking Joe Blo, girls
get Spun like a Yo-Yo with a deadly Pun from a verbal G.I Joe
from head to Toe Bro So i Go Slow, my mouth can only Grow Dro,
having these girls on a quest for me like that dude Frodo/

/Lord of the Rings, one strike from the tongue is like a hit
from the Scorpion Sting, warrior type i'm the Scorpion King, vicious
predator its a Scorpion Thing, and Brings the venomous
type of pain that a Scorpion Bring/

/Most industry rappers are more sugar coated than Duncan Hines,
with Fake Designs, who's Fate Undermines the real artist in the
street who Make money & Take Grinds, until their Bake Climbs
high enough to Rake Rinds <-- (cheese) too many rappers these
days have Fake Lines too many Opaque Rhymes mixed with
Cake Minds produces pumping out Frosted Flake Finds,
no changes and the clock continues to Take Winds/
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Old Posted: 07-16-10 at 01:02 AM
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As I sit here and think about what to do
Its as if all we do is fight Boo
And I dont kno why we do this
All I do is think about is our first kiss
Standing out the bowling alley, remember that
All you wanted to do was go outside and chat
Well I now wish I wouldve known that all we'd do is fight
Cuz then I dont kno if we would be together, I wanna make this right
All I got to say is I'm sorry
I'm sorry for acting like an ass
I cant get over that one Monday night
If you ever found out...Another big fight
And then to think we'd go our separate ways
Jus thinking about telling you puts me in a daze
Jessica, I'm sorry for ever wasting your time with me
So as I get ready to tell you, baby Im setting you free
I dont kno how much longer I can hold this in
I wish things couldve been...
Better for the both of us
Baby please dont cuss
That Monday night...
I kno it wasnt right...
I kissed another girl

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